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Let me show you - when I get lost
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Let me show you - when I get lost |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands 
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 Walking through my garden I found your shining blue Starlike little flower I'll sit a while with you  And as I went along I saw this lovely rose Pinkshade petals fragile So for a while I froze  Remembrance of St. Anne Your name suits you so well For the whole summer long I'll recognize your smell  Climbing high on the fence Is what you're ment to do One day you will succeed To reach the bright sky blue I hope you did enjoy This little stroll with me Whenever I feel lost This is the place I'll be A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100 [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 07-09-2001).] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
You have lovely flowers and verse, Titia.  All writing comes |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
what a treat for the senses!
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
There's nothing like a garden for peace, contemplaces and memories....nicely done, Titia |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Beautiful garden, beautiful work |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
awesome yuh |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Titia~ I could remain lost in this beautiful garden ! My ! You do such a lovely job of taking us on a lovely stroll ! Thank you.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Qumar Fatthi Member
since 2001-05-20
Posts 59Pakistan |
Nicely written....... i like it ,..........
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Thoroughly enjoyed!!! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Lone Wolf, thanks Irish Rose, I wished you could smell them Balladeer, you're so right, thanks Interloper,  Wayoutwalt,  Marge, you're always welcome if you need to get lost Qumar Fatthi, thanks for reading Shadow974, Glad you did Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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