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Open Poetry #14

Say no more

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-07-09 07:50 PM

Say no more.
I speak but no one listens,
it's one of those days that life seem to drag.
An easy burden,
with no hold.
Following me until I'm gone.
Endless pleasures,
give me pain.
Having to bargain between heaven and hell.
No escaping into arms,
where freedom I won't find.
Keep pretending trying to find,
happiness that last.
Gloomy treasures with many traps,
leading me into a deep ocean to drown.
Say no more.

[This message has been edited by walker (edited 07-10-2001).]

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

1 posted 2001-07-10 01:18 AM

I'm listening, and the dog's here, too. I read your poem to him. We both understood and will be up for awhile if you need us. Be well.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-07-10 06:07 AM

There is so much dispair in this one, you ok?

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

3 posted 2001-07-10 08:13 AM

Thank you for your concern.It was one of those days that negativity sips in. Overall,I'm ok.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2001-07-10 09:52 AM

Endless pleasures,
give me pain
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Interesting and thought provoking prhase. May I borrow it?

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

5 posted 2001-07-10 04:15 PM

Interloper- yes of course, I'll look forward to your poem.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-04-28 03:59 AM

I do know how this feels

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