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walker
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0 posted 2001-07-09 07:50 PM



Say no more.
I speak but no one listens,
it's one of those days that life seem to drag.
An easy burden,
with no hold.
Following me until I'm gone.
Endless pleasures,
give me pain.
Having to bargain between heaven and hell.
No escaping into arms,
where freedom I won't find.
Keep pretending trying to find,
happiness that last.
Gloomy treasures with many traps,
leading me into a deep ocean to drown.
Say no more.

[This message has been edited by walker (edited 07-10-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
JLR
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since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785

1 posted 2001-07-10 01:18 AM


I'm listening, and the dog's here, too.  I read your poem to him.  We both understood and will be up for awhile if you need us.  Be well.
Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
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2 posted 2001-07-10 06:07 AM


There is so much dispair in this one,  you ok?


walker
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since 2001-02-11
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3 posted 2001-07-10 08:13 AM


Thank you for your concern.It was one of those days that negativity sips in. Overall,I'm ok.
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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2001-07-10 09:52 AM


Endless pleasures,
give me pain
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Interesting and thought provoking prhase.  May I borrow it?

walker
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5 posted 2001-07-10 04:15 PM


Interloper- yes of course, I'll look forward to your poem.
passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2004-04-28 03:59 AM


I do know how this feels
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