Open Poetry #14 |
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Eyeglasses---third originating post today |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Eyeglasses Virginia Salter eyeglasses, eyeglasses lying on a mirror reflecting all I cannot see in this moment here all I have is what might have been etched in my memory along with thoughts what could occur in my time to be what might have been what could occur the essence of the now is naught but dimming blur the history of my hours spent I’m feeling so unsure was it a dream laced with nightmares woven in or were the nightmares interrupted by the dreams that might have been I look at my hands and wonder what they’ve done I look at my feet have they walked a thundered run? all the fingers, all the toes are full intact, that’s certain will they have given, will they have walked their path to final curtain did toes lead and heels follow did hands reach out with deeds that kept the flow of river’s hands from bogging in the reeds © July 8, 2001 I'll be back after church to read and comment. |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Somnambulation? |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
heh heh no, I was readying for church and had lain my glasses upon a hand mirror, the reflection that I could see from the angle of my view was only the glasses, the rest was just a grayish blur...thus this poem was inspired btw, I do know, in reality, that my life is dreams with a few nightmares not the other way around, but that would have ended the poem with a thud, probably |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Seems with the absence of eyeglasses that your spiritual eyes were opened quite widely..... nicely written. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thanks, Lighthousebob, I'd like to think of it like that, yep, thank you! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good write |
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