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The Eyes of a Child
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The Eyes of a Child |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az 
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The Eyes of a Child The eyes of a child see so much They see the world at ease They even feel the slightest touch Of air drifting in the breeze They see when there is sadness When it isn't even shown They look right past the madness When sometimes we still don't They see more in us Than we can ever find They are unconditional, plus They have the love God binds The eyes of a child see love first The rest comes with time They love you when you're at your worst Im thankful they are mine Cpalmer July 3, 2001 God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
The eyes of a child see so much They see the world at ease They even feel the slightest touch Of air drifting in the breeze ================ Indeed, the eyes of a child see sooooo much and we .....adults are too blinded to see all that they see.....  I've really enjoyed this soft twinkling piece...... Thank you dear......  ****************************** It's only me.......only me |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Dear Myenchanted_melody, Isnt it so true what a child can teach us about life? They do see all the things we miss it seems....thanks for reading Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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Kirksters Junior Member
since 2001-07-01
Posts 47 |
Really enjoyed this one, isn't it amazing what kids teach us. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
They are truly a blessing. This was precious!! All writing comes |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
C, The greatest gift that can be given to us are our children. We can see so much beauty through their eyes that we are too blind to see through ours alone. This is beautiful... Elise |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Kirksters! You know my kids and what they have taught me! They are truely a blessing in my life and they miss you! Lyll Cindi Lone wolf I have found that my kids sometimes are my only refuge...I thank god everyday for them...thanks for reading. hugs Cindi Atena4 Children surely are the true blessing in life...nothing else seems to matter much when I look into their eyes...thank for reading. Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
dont you sometimes wish you could see thru their eyes..just for a day... how awesome that would be..i like this one hugs, g "If you should die before me, ask if you could bring a friend." |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cindi~ So many gentle thoughts in this piece from your heart. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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WhiteDragon Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 70O-town, Fl |
Another great poem. I loved it. May we all try to see through the eyes of a child. God Bless, Jeremy |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very gentle thoughts... I enjoyed! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a touching piece |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Thanks Chris for bringing this forward. It is a gentle read. Nicely done Cindi. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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