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dreamwolf
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0 posted 2001-07-09 03:21 PM


Who's that special someone
who's waiting in the halls?
Who's that special someone
who I can daily call?
Who's that special someone
who sticks right by my side?
Who's that special someone
who reads all that I write?
Who's that special someone
I love with all my might?
Who's that special someone
who calls me day and night?
Who's that special someone
who goes with me where ever?
Who's that special someone
who's with me in bad weather?
Who's that special someone
who sometimes is a pest?
That special person could only be
the friend I love the best!



© Copyright 2001 Krista Hood - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-07-09 03:25 PM


Welcome to Passions!  You'll find that friends are very important in these blue walls...and you'll find us to be VERY kind!

Please check your e-mail for a special message!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




WhiteDragon
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2 posted 2001-07-09 03:34 PM


Nice thought, and nicely written.  And from a ten year old?!?!!? *feeling stinky*
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3 posted 2001-07-09 05:00 PM


Welcome to passions....enjoyed your poem and it makes me wish to be that special person

Well done
Charisma

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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
4 posted 2001-07-09 07:32 PM




Welcome ((New poet)) ......

Very nice thoughts.....and feelings and expressed well........
We all wish for such a friend.....don't we?

Welcome again.......

Thank you
***************************

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

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5 posted 2001-07-09 08:46 PM


DreamWolf~

I'd say that your best friend is pretty gosh-darned lucky too !

This is WONDERFUL !
You deserve a special welcome to this big circle of friends -

Welcome, sweet poet!I'm you're here, Ms. Krista~

I'll look forward to reading more from you ! !  
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com               

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6 posted 2001-07-09 09:04 PM


Hi Krista!!! I promise to be honest with you no matter HOW often your mom threatens me!


I liked your poem - you definitely have talent. And I liked your drawing that I saw too. I really look forward to reading more from you here!    

Lone Wolf
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7 posted 2001-07-09 09:05 PM


I think this poem is a special one full of love and devotion.  Very well written!

Welcome to Passions and I hope you stick around.  

P.S.  Cool name!!!!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

vlraynes
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8 posted 2001-07-09 09:11 PM



Welcome Krista!!  


I'm so glad to see you here, and
I can't wait to read more of your poetry.  
I love this one!  

~Vicky



"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes


[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 07-09-2001).]

shadow974
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9 posted 2001-07-09 09:30 PM


Nice to meet you Krista, I loved your poem. It made me think of my feelings for a special person in my life!!!
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10 posted 2001-07-10 12:29 PM


Kris---I'm so proud of you, and a little jealous too, watching you fill that notebook, and you learn so fast! YOU? Are MY "special person!"  
Irish Rose
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11 posted 2001-07-10 06:53 AM


welcome to Passions!


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12 posted 2001-07-10 08:36 AM


welcome to passions...helen
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13 posted 2001-07-10 08:39 AM


(smiling) Well I guess I'll have to be nice... wouldn't want your Mom mad at me....


Nicely done... and should make your friend proud to know a poem was written in their honor.. keep writing!!

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14 posted 2001-07-10 10:37 AM


Welcome to Passions. I look forward to more of your work.
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