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To the Poets of Care |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Alas sweet love may play you fool and leave you doubting what's ahead a righteous love can turn to cruel such that you wonder if you're dead. Such change abrupt can stagger some to fall upon an earthly pile if left alone, their life is done just draining out in bits of while. Solution lies in caring voice in friends of heart you may not know those angels that do have the choice yet choose to never let you go. How many sinking times have come throughout the years of sorrow blue still help arrives in form of some a stranger, still a friend of true. May God or Goddess bless you all for taking time to care and see because of you, I can stand tall and gather up what's left of me. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cat, Very true and a very good poem. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Sweet, flowing, and touching. I feel the same, and you have expressed this feeling very nicely. Thank God for the people who choose a "path of light" and help others find it for themselves... -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, I can relate to this only too well. You will always have the love of angels to comfort you, and be there in the good and bad... Love you, my friend... Love, Elise |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
and excellent poem.....and very true.  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
How many sinking times have come throughout the years of sorrow blue still help arrives in form of some a stranger, still a friend of true. May God or Goddess bless you all for taking time to care and see because of you, I can stand tall and gather up what's left of me. =================================== I love the message of this Sandra... and your rhyme flow made this a pleasure to read aloud... very cool poem...well conceived and written jm Feels like Im dancing with truth and wisdom |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Very nice poem, with much thought meaning. Left me thinking. Thank you. Rick |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: Thank you for this, Cat....yet one more way to explain the magic of this place! |
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