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WhiteDragon
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0 posted 2001-07-09 02:06 PM


I want to say I love you, I want to tell you oh so much,
want to tell you how i need you, how i long for your touch,
how whenever we're together, even in my dreams,
i see how beautiful ev'rything around me seems,
how your face is in my mind, every minute, every day,
how i never thought that i could ever even feel this way,
how your smile lights my life, and your eyes contain my soul,
how whenever i am with you, i feel as though i'm whole.
i want to scream it from a building, want to carve it on a tree;
i want to say i love you, but my fears are stopping me.

Jeremy




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1 posted 2001-07-09 02:33 PM



It can be a very unnerving reality love...

so when you find yourself knowing that your world is not complete without it, or the person you would love...

you'll find nerve enough to let her know!

MARK V SHELDON
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2 posted 2001-07-09 09:06 PM


Stop torturing yourself and 'JUST DO IT!"  You'll be so much happier for having stated your feelings, either way:  if everything goes as you had hoped and dreamed...  well, there it is!  (and more often than not, our fears turn out to be over-exaggerated insecurities and imagination.)   And if not...  at least you'll have made peace with yourself, for you did your part and were honest to the other person and with yourself...  (you WERE honest, right?).  I feel for what you're describing but never let fear get the best of you.

-MVS

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear;  few can listen."

Lone Wolf
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3 posted 2001-07-09 09:11 PM


Don't let your fears stand in the way of your happiness, Jeremy.  Tell her!!!  You won't regret it.  You have a special second chance at love here, don't waste it.  BEst wishes to you.  

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by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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4 posted 2001-07-10 08:11 AM


well... I think many of us have had fears about telling someone how we feel, and you have captured it well here...enjoyed!!
Spine Grinder
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5 posted 2001-07-11 07:44 AM


wow i loved this.......u should just tell her how u feel. i think u'll regret it if u dont.....believe me i know from personal expierence. neways, lovely poem. thanks 4 the read.

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Don't belong, Don't exist, Don't give a S***, Don't ever judge me  -Slipknot
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