Open Poetry #14 |
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Language Insufficient |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia ![]() |
Language insufficient to plumb the depths of God To speak of wondrous heaven where angel steps have trod Manifold experiences beyond this earthly sod Show language insufficient to explain the depths of God Our human emotions backed by time and tides Explore the depths and wonders of our earthly sides Here beyond the pale, a new creation bides No words have we to describe, God's everlasting ides Restricted by humanness, tied here to this earth Our language insufficient to tell of death of birth There is much more to this, than compassed by worlds girth But language insufficient, won't reveal or give due worth Sometimes we get an inkling, of God's almighty plan It's at those times words fail us, we can't take in the span To stand in awe and wonder that makes us more the man As language insufficient, leads to worship of the lamb Battling through religion's, constraining bonds to sing With language insufficient for the knowledge that we bring One day when our time has passed and we stand before the king Our language insufficiency will not mean a thing Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
You gonna be a nun ! ![]() |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done.. while not religious myself.. I certainly enjoyed... |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Amen. |
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WhiteDragon Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 70O-town, Fl |
Wow, that was very nice...and very true. I loved it. God Bless, Jeremy |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Keth...came back looking for this, as the first time I read it? Language was indeed insufficient for reply! You managed to find sufficent language to explain why the inexplicable is inexplicable...(I know..sometimes I give MYSELF headaches...lol)Wonderful job with this, WELL DONE!!!! |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
how beautiful Kethry....your words have the right language and truly sufficient as it touched my heart deeply. (((warm hugs))) Charisma [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 07-09-2001).] |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
remember that our language is only insufficient to explain our thoughts and feelings to one another... God understands, merely from our attempt. as is so often true of your work, this is profound and beautiful. -Napalm I Love The Smell Of Napalm In The AM! |
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