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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-07-08 07:49 PM


I may not know your name just yet
perhaps we've passed eachother by
I know I wait, we have not met
somehow I feel the time is nigh.

A vision forms within my mind
insists on dwelling permanent
a voice, a word, a touch of kind
a man of love from heaven sent.

In dreams and every waking deed
I see a face of one not known
A planting soon to come to seed
a time to reap what has been sown.

Mayhap his name I soon shall know
and with that thought, my love shall flow.

© Copyright 2001 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2001-07-08 07:54 PM


beautiful Sandra...in rhyme and rhythm and thought

hugsss

Maureen

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
2 posted 2001-07-08 09:58 PM


and your wishes will all come true, you know...all you must do is believe!!!  Another wonderful write from my lil sis!!

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end...
  
    


MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...
3 posted 2001-07-08 11:17 PM


I hope that lucky man meets you soon -- you deserve it.  Enjoying the "change of heart" coming across your poems, lately...  flowing with positivity and hope.  Yay!

-MVS

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear;  few can listen."

Logan
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since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641
Arkansas
4 posted 2001-07-08 11:19 PM


Yes, the time is nigh, for how else could it not be, for one who deserves it so much..very gentle smile
athena4
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since 2000-12-10
Posts 622

5 posted 2001-07-09 11:18 PM


Sandra,
    "He" is out there, we both know that. And if anyone deserves a David or Richard, it is you. You will find him....
          Love, Elise

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
6 posted 2001-07-09 11:39 PM


Hi Sandra,

This is so lovely and full of hope, I am so glad to see you writing such lovely words,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



snowpants
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since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061
KS
7 posted 2001-07-10 01:15 AM


Well, call me old-fashioned, but, I do still believe that there is a 'someone' out there for everyone...but, wonderful rhyme and flow, Sandra...great write...

sp  

it was love that first drew me,
it is love that will keep me here...
now I see love burning brightly
when everything else is unclear...

Ariana
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since 2000-10-08
Posts 571
Orlando, Florida
8 posted 2001-07-10 06:59 AM


Sandra

Yes - he is out there.  Remnember it is what is in your heart that counts.  Looks are only skin deep.  Beautiful words.  You go girl!

passing shadows
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displaced
9 posted 2004-04-28 04:14 AM


good piece
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