Open Poetry #14 |
Soon |
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I may not know your name just yet perhaps we've passed eachother by I know I wait, we have not met somehow I feel the time is nigh. A vision forms within my mind insists on dwelling permanent a voice, a word, a touch of kind a man of love from heaven sent. In dreams and every waking deed I see a face of one not known A planting soon to come to seed a time to reap what has been sown. Mayhap his name I soon shall know and with that thought, my love shall flow. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
beautiful Sandra...in rhyme and rhythm and thought hugsss Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
and your wishes will all come true, you know...all you must do is believe!!! Another wonderful write from my lil sis!! The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
I hope that lucky man meets you soon -- you deserve it. Enjoying the "change of heart" coming across your poems, lately... flowing with positivity and hope. Yay! -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Yes, the time is nigh, for how else could it not be, for one who deserves it so much..very gentle smile |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, "He" is out there, we both know that. And if anyone deserves a David or Richard, it is you. You will find him.... Love, Elise |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sandra, This is so lovely and full of hope, I am so glad to see you writing such lovely words, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Well, call me old-fashioned, but, I do still believe that there is a 'someone' out there for everyone...but, wonderful rhyme and flow, Sandra...great write... sp it was love that first drew me, |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Sandra Yes - he is out there. Remnember it is what is in your heart that counts. Looks are only skin deep. Beautiful words. You go girl! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good piece |
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