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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2001-06-23 06:04 PM



Love is All That I Know

Life’s trivial joys sometimes linger inside
There may be no laughter, yet there they abide
Elated , but silent, my happy heart sings
For a small bit of gladness life suddenly brings

Life’s most bitter sorrow is secretly kept
The wound is unseen, yet through years I have wept
The scar deep inside still produces some tears
For the beautiful dreams that were lost through the years

The splendor of music can open the heart
For tears of emotion to quickly depart    
Both sorrow and joy fill the life I have led
I know not from which one the teardrops are shed

My heart flashes back to the days long ago
When the melody plays, love is all that I know

Elizabeth Santos  

© Copyright 2001 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-06-23 06:07 PM


and may you, dear Lady, forever know love....

for it is all I have ever seen you give....

vlraynes
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2 posted 2001-06-23 06:14 PM


Elizabeth-
   oh my...how i've missed reading you..
   this is so absolutely beautiful.
   i love this so much...
   thanks for sharing this piece of your heart  

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Suetang
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3 posted 2001-06-23 06:17 PM


This was so exquisite, I loved every word.
Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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4 posted 2001-06-23 06:49 PM


may it always be. . .

love this. . .  

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

wayoutwalt
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5 posted 2001-06-23 06:51 PM


i love the double teardrop thought o yuh. nice poem
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6 posted 2001-06-24 02:27 AM


Liz,

Thank you.  This brought me a smile.  So pretty.

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the human mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

Kit McCallum
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7 posted 2001-06-24 07:21 AM


Exceptional cadence and beautiful rhyme Liz ... they compliment your tender sentiments so wonderfully. A splendid poem, just lovely my friend, as always.  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Justbleu
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8 posted 2001-06-29 12:50 PM


The things love does to us.....very nice poem!!!

Bridgette  

Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side

Yu Lan
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9 posted 2001-07-09 10:19 PM


Hugz to you Liz, I am glad you have such a love to remember.. and it'll always be all u know, 'coz u know we all love u here..  
Sorry, i haven't been reading a lot of poetry lately, so I've let a lot of yours slip by.. I'll have to catch up! I hate to miss reading any of your poetry, they are all so deliciously real..  
-Lynne

“One word can be magical. Imagine then, the effect of several words, together..”

Irish Rose
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10 posted 2001-07-09 10:28 PM


This is one of the most beautiful touching poems I've read in a very long time.....


WhiteDragon
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11 posted 2001-07-09 11:17 PM


This is such a beautiful poem.  Thank you for sharing, it inspired me.  Jeremy
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12 posted 2001-07-09 11:44 PM


Hi Sweet Lady,

This is so beautiful, I think of you all of the time, I hope life is well with you,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



Elizabeth Santos
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13 posted 2001-07-10 07:09 AM


Your messages are so sweet. Thank you all for your response to this poem.
They are very heart warming
Liz

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14 posted 2004-04-28 04:15 AM


beautiful
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