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My Sorrow
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My Sorrow |
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VI New Member
since 2001-07-07
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In the event of pain sometime lies the truth A truth that has been tainted by a feeling of oppression The road ahead although traveled seems far away The sun atop my face reflects the compassion of what the world has to offer I'm lost Any feeling of understanding could cast the gloom of clouds that hide my tears in the rain Your rapture is the liberation of my understanding I fall free, but the quest for serenity is my conviction Your friendship has severed my from seclusion As if a dandelion grown wild I stand free My admission of sorrow is not meeting you sooner VI |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: I do like this line! |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Amazing how you found your freedom and understanding through sorrow..... I also liked the metaphore of the dandelion. Nicely written. |
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