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brian madden
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ireland

0 posted 2001-07-08 04:41 PM


I have some thing to say,
Perhaps a peril of wisdom
Or the rant of a fool
Still there is a learned moral
Within the most misplaced statement
It is all good, yes it is all good.
That is what I said.
It is all good,
Confused I shall try to explain.
I am typing fast,
in a mire of sonic thoughts
Fuelled by a single beer.
It is all good.

Even heart break has its silver lining,
Was it not the rumble of a former love
That brought her to me.
Still she aches, still I mistrust
Still we are not perfect
but within the chaos
we found some contentment.
People come and people go,
Life but a revolving door,
a podium on which to say your piece
and make way for others.
IT is not the span of our fame
That holds worth,
no it is the memories
We leave with the ones we touched.
Remember you can learn from every one
you meet whether the lesson be hard or soft.
Don't cry over all that you have lost,
It is but dust, celebrate instead what you have gained.

It is all good,
Every breath
Every hour you live,
Every heart you touch.
It is all good.

Life affirmation is not high on my list
But somewhere along, out slipped bliss.
This is not poetic, or prophetic
Whatever, whatever
It is all good.

[This message has been edited by brian madden (edited 07-08-2001).]

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inot2B
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1 posted 2001-07-08 04:51 PM


"Don't cry over all that you have lost,
It is but dust, celebrate instead what you have gained."


So true, but still very hard to do.
Brian what you write is very upbeat. I hope that this is how your life is going for you.

SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet
2 posted 2001-07-08 06:17 PM


People come and people go,
Life but a revolving door,
a podium on which to say your piece
and make way for others.


  I like your thoughts and I like the way you display them.  Great poem!
~Krista

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2001-07-08 06:20 PM


quote:

It is all good,
Every breath
Every hour you live,
Every heart you touch.
It is all good.




Indeed it is...you just keep telling us!

I enjoyed, Brian...but then, I always do!

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2001-07-08 07:32 PM


celebrate .... what you have gained.
You are a very smart person, Brian. And as usual you have penned a fine piece.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



serenity blaze
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5 posted 2001-07-08 08:31 PM


Bri? this is what my dad tells me all the time...great minds and beautiful spirits think alike, eh? HUGS for this one...is lovely.  
Janet Marie
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6 posted 2001-07-08 08:45 PM


IT is not the span of our fame
That holds worth,
no it is the memories
We leave with the ones we touched.
Remember you can learn from every one
you meet whether the lesson be hard or soft.
Don't cry over all that you have lost,
It is but dust, celebrate instead what you have gained.


It is all good,
Every breath
Every hour you live,
Every heart you touch.
It is all good.

Life affirmation is not high on my list
But somewhere along, out slipped bliss.
This is not poetic, or prophetic
Whatever, whatever
It is all good.
==================================

Oh...I so disagree...tis BOTH poetic and prophetic ....
and wisdom and truth....
but hey....where was the rhyme???  
ahhh never mind...ITS ALL GOOD
later-prophet-gator *S*
eve

Feels like Im dancing with truth and wisdom
Precious rhythm you are my guide
These days are sacred, my heart is humble
Oh warrior show me the light

JLR
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since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785

7 posted 2001-07-09 12:50 PM


brian---I loved this, poetic, prophetic, or not...I loved it!
Severn
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8 posted 2001-07-09 01:51 AM


Bri:

'Life but a revolving door'

I've decided this is now a proverb  

Liking it muchly my friend...keep writing k? So I have something good to read lol..

K

I am a refugee of logic...insisting
on unlikely land with every step.


JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
9 posted 2001-07-09 04:39 AM


I like your thoughts...James
ethome
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New Brunswick Canada
10 posted 2001-07-09 05:19 AM


Great wisdom from within Brian!    A very enjoyable read to reflect on!

The enjoyment of this consciousness we enjoy everyday can't be explained but it sure can be enjoyed!

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
11 posted 2001-07-09 07:50 AM


Perfectly "good"  Brian. Upbeat is good sometimes. You wrote this well, as you do all your styles. Sometimes I actually feel this way.  
Sandra

brian madden
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12 posted 2001-07-09 06:31 PM


THanks to all for your words, I can't explain this unadulterated happiness. I must be coming down with something.

WHATEVER NEVERMIND...the smartest thing Kurt Cobain ever said.  

"Like Sand underneath the snow, I make you mine." Kristin Hersh

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