Open Poetry #14 |
It is all good |
brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I have some thing to say, Perhaps a peril of wisdom Or the rant of a fool Still there is a learned moral Within the most misplaced statement It is all good, yes it is all good. That is what I said. It is all good, Confused I shall try to explain. I am typing fast, in a mire of sonic thoughts Fuelled by a single beer. It is all good. Even heart break has its silver lining, Was it not the rumble of a former love That brought her to me. Still she aches, still I mistrust Still we are not perfect but within the chaos we found some contentment. People come and people go, Life but a revolving door, a podium on which to say your piece and make way for others. IT is not the span of our fame That holds worth, no it is the memories We leave with the ones we touched. Remember you can learn from every one you meet whether the lesson be hard or soft. Don't cry over all that you have lost, It is but dust, celebrate instead what you have gained. It is all good, Every breath Every hour you live, Every heart you touch. It is all good. Life affirmation is not high on my list But somewhere along, out slipped bliss. This is not poetic, or prophetic Whatever, whatever It is all good. [This message has been edited by brian madden (edited 07-08-2001).] |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
"Don't cry over all that you have lost, It is but dust, celebrate instead what you have gained." So true, but still very hard to do. Brian what you write is very upbeat. I hope that this is how your life is going for you. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Life but a revolving door, a podium on which to say your piece and make way for others. I like your thoughts and I like the way you display them. Great poem! ~Krista "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: Indeed it is...you just keep telling us! I enjoyed, Brian...but then, I always do! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
celebrate .... what you have gained. You are a very smart person, Brian. And as usual you have penned a fine piece. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Bri? this is what my dad tells me all the time...great minds and beautiful spirits think alike, eh? HUGS for this one...is lovely. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
IT is not the span of our fame That holds worth, no it is the memories We leave with the ones we touched. Remember you can learn from every one you meet whether the lesson be hard or soft. Don't cry over all that you have lost, It is but dust, celebrate instead what you have gained. It is all good, Every breath Every hour you live, Every heart you touch. It is all good. Life affirmation is not high on my list But somewhere along, out slipped bliss. This is not poetic, or prophetic Whatever, whatever It is all good. ================================== Oh...I so disagree...tis BOTH poetic and prophetic .... and wisdom and truth.... but hey....where was the rhyme??? ahhh never mind...ITS ALL GOOD later-prophet-gator *S* eve Feels like Im dancing with truth and wisdom |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
brian---I loved this, poetic, prophetic, or not...I loved it! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Bri: 'Life but a revolving door' I've decided this is now a proverb Liking it muchly my friend...keep writing k? So I have something good to read lol.. K I am a refugee of logic...insisting |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I like your thoughts...James |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great wisdom from within Brian! A very enjoyable read to reflect on! The enjoyment of this consciousness we enjoy everyday can't be explained but it sure can be enjoyed! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Perfectly "good" Brian. Upbeat is good sometimes. You wrote this well, as you do all your styles. Sometimes I actually feel this way. Sandra |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
THanks to all for your words, I can't explain this unadulterated happiness. I must be coming down with something. WHATEVER NEVERMIND...the smartest thing Kurt Cobain ever said. "Like Sand underneath the snow, I make you mine." Kristin Hersh |
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