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My Secret Moon |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL 
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Something about you still remains wonderful. In all my passion, truth, and lies, You shine there in the dark of the midnight sky, And make my inner secrets flow from my hands. As my hands betray my innocent mischief, I surpass myself, and begin to write of true beauty. I begin to write of you. [This message has been edited by Temptress (edited 07-07-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
indeed. . . you do write of it well. . . and if this is your secret. . . then it's no wonder your writings are so passionate and deep. . .  --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Gentle one, then he is most fortunate for your words to flow as they do, based on thoughts of him..this is very well done, as you always do...very gentle smile |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
this is tender caressing |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
Thank you |
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Qumar Fatthi Member
since 2001-05-20
Posts 59Pakistan |
yeh! i feel............ Something about you still remains wonderful. In all my passion, truth, and lies, u r writting well dear! |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Perhaps also, you begin to write of yourself?? Just me again, seeing where you get your inspiration. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it never really goes away |
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