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WhiteDragon Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 70O-town, Fl 
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what a load of crap. From my experience i'm positive, that nice guys finish last. You share your hopes and dreams with me, but your love I am denied. When all is said and done you'll see, through all the tears you've cried, that my love is the one for you, but will it be too late? For many tears I've cried too, and given up on fate. But then i see your smile shine through, and everything is fine. I guess the wait will have to do, until your heart's in mine. Jeremy Carey |
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BirdeeB Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 106USA |
love is a hard thing to deal with sometimes it actually sucks. but hey we're only human we are programed to love. Awesome Write! BirdeeB |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Jeremy I do believe they want a man that can be sensitive when necessary and a mmf when necessary...James |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You sound kinda bitter...and like James says....we do want a sensitive guy...but not a pushover ya know? LOL just like guys want a woman who is feminine but not clingy...its a fine line we walk where love is concerned...welcome to Passions |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Welcome!!! It probably has to do with the woman...and just WHERE the guy is sensitive, some want the guy sensitive to their needs and not his own. Kind of a "me"ness to that isn't it. I know the world's got the guys all mixed up as to what line they're to walk, how does one 'care for' someone without 'managing' them? But, you know, women are just confused, too, as to what they're supposed to do. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Welcome!  I understand your feelings here.....don't have any advice at the moment, but I liked the way you have expressed yourself Will look for more....... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Please, check your e-mail for a special message! |
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WhiteDragon Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 70O-town, Fl |
Hey all, thanks for all the replies! I actually started this poem in 8th grade about a girl who I liked that I watched date jerk after jerk while i was there the whole time. Last night, after almost 3 years I decided to finish it :-) Thanks again, God Bless. Jeremy |
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Qumar Fatthi Member
since 2001-05-20
Posts 59Pakistan |
u r a good observer............ and nicely written carry on.............................. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I have to confess to the truth of this...and it's something I am coming to terms with too. I think in my case it had to do with the idea, that a guy who was a jerk was something familiar to me--and that says more about ME then it does about the nice guys that I chose to ignore. (may I suggest you go for the older ladies, who now know better?  rofl...) Welcome to Passions! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
well. . . the ladies here have totally said what I was going to say. . . they're great aren't they?? great job. . . and Welcome!!!! ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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