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Trina Member
since 2001-06-28
Posts 97 |
I can't feel it anymore when you attempt to make love I feel nothing no pleasure, no pain I just lay there waiting for it to all be over It's like a nightmare that I can't escape when I close my eyes and reopen them you are still there trying so hard to make things work I see nothing happening I have no feelings for you nothing positive or negative to say I just want you gone I want to live my life without you You make no difference in my life you do nothing for me physically, mentally, emotionally spiritually you might as well not be here because I no longer sense your presence anyway |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Trina This was so very sad and I hope you find the love and happiness you are looking for....Sue Suetang |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Ouch. I'd ask "what happened?", if it were any of my business... I hope the person for whom this is written figures out your feelings before being shattered by having them be exposed to them... ...and I hope you find what you're looking for (going, of course, on the assumption that this is all true and personal...) -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
_______________________________________________________________ is that the message here? [This message has been edited by VAS (edited 07-08-2001).] |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Geez weren't we married once? |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
This relationship sounds familiar..nicely done ~Victoria~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is intensely personal, wow, you have a lot of courage posting this one!
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Trina Member
since 2001-06-28
Posts 97 |
Thank you everyone for your comments. I'm glad you all took time out to post your thoughts. I must say no this is not from my personal experience it was once again something I made up. I just can't stop making things up ,it's apart of me. Lol, thanx again everyone. Take care, Trina |
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