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Omniscient Moon
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Omniscient Moon |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet 
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Glowing moon, mirrored by my eyes. Shining sphere, window of the skies. Silvery creature echoing through the tides. Nature's wisdom, Hidden within its mass. |
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BirdeeB Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 106USA |
wow that was soft and pretty. oh and thank you for your response. BB |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Ya think? nice feel to this one, smittenkitten, very nice what's this form called...you have a rhyme pattern, then the last line departs from it, which seems to accentuate the point you're making with your statement |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
BB ~ I'm happy you liked it  thank you also for the read and reply, much appreciated.VAS ~ thank you very much I don't know if there's a name for the form I used...I just went with what came out of my head! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Regardless the form, I liked it very much |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Interloper ~ thank you kindly! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SmittenKitten~ I'm magnetically drawn to 'moon' poems. Enjoyed your treatment of this tremendously. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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