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Me Is Never Enough
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Me Is Never Enough |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Me Is Never Enough The man of her dreams possesses a million things I haven't got. I won't waste my time or energy pretending I'm someone I am not. At some point she realized I didn't have anything to give her except me. At that time she suddenly remembered her overwhelming desire to be free. Jameslee@July07,2001 |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
then it is her loss my friend. . . you are always enough. . . a sad write here James. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
I'm with SVEN on that one... says all you need to know about her, if you ask me. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
So much truth and sorrow in these lines James ... but if we can't be ourselves, then in the end ... it is not enough for "us". Beautiful phrasing in this piece, very well done.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is so sad, but you know, you ARE enough, she is just not seeing it. So therefore the one who will see it, must still be waiting in the wings. Great portrayal of this feeling. Peace Sandra |
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