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Mr»ÄlleÿÇät
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0 posted 2001-07-07 10:58 AM


Life Changes

Weaving of life's tapestry
The meaning of its mystery
Change just a stitch or two
A new pattern comes into view
Building on the one before
Old and new entwine the core
Friends are fragments here and there
Strengthened by the thread we share
The present is our interface
Stitches dropped an others placed
Tie the future to the past
We can change the stitch at last
When we come to understand
It is we who guide the needles hand
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Mr»ÄlleÿÇät


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Jonathon A. Lowry
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1 posted 2001-07-07 11:15 AM


very nice  i like poems using metaphors about life
makes people put into perspective in a different manner
very nice
thanx for the reply alot of peoplo were cold last night

                  jonathon

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21
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2 posted 2001-07-07 11:21 AM


I enjoyed this one too.  I like the imagery and the clever ways you've chosen to state your thoughts through the metaphors here.  I often do the same in my writings -- gives the poem more angles to contemplate and consider.

-MVS

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear;  few can listen."

Mr»ÄlleÿÇät
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3 posted 2001-07-07 11:46 AM


Thank you Jonathon,
And your welcome on your poem  
You have a way with the literary art
Mr»ÄlleÿÇät


Mr»ÄlleÿÇät
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4 posted 2001-07-07 11:49 AM


Thank you Mark,
Yes I like to write in a way that make people think.

Mr»ÄlleÿÇät


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