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Life Changes (revised)
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Life Changes (revised) |
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Mr»ÄlleÿÇät Member
since 2001-06-02
Posts 190 |
Life Changes Weaving of life's tapestry The meaning of its mystery Change just a stitch or two A new pattern comes into view Building on the one before Old and new entwine the core Friends are fragments here and there Strengthened by the thread we share The present is our interface Stitches dropped an others placed Tie the future to the past We can change the stitch at last When we come to understand It is we who guide the needles hand Author Mr»ÄlleÿÇät |
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Jonathon A. Lowry Junior Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 38 |
very nice i like poems using metaphors about life makes people put into perspective in a different manner very nice thanx for the reply alot of peoplo were cold last night jonathon |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
I enjoyed this one too. I like the imagery and the clever ways you've chosen to state your thoughts through the metaphors here. I often do the same in my writings -- gives the poem more angles to contemplate and consider. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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Mr»ÄlleÿÇät Member
since 2001-06-02
Posts 190 |
Thank you Jonathon, And your welcome on your poem  You have a way with the literary art Mr»ÄlleÿÇät |
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Mr»ÄlleÿÇät Member
since 2001-06-02
Posts 190 |
Thank you Mark, Yes I like to write in a way that make people think. Mr»ÄlleÿÇät |
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