Open Poetry #14 |
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The Dream |
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VI New Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 2 |
I dreamed that your voice sent me into seclusion As if a school of birds I drift free I dreamed that I was consumed by your passion It sent chills like a winter wind I dreamed of a hiding place I found serenity in your eyes I dreamed of a candle atop my windowsill Just past it was an image of you I dreamed of the spring I dreamed of the heavens I dreamed of of life without you I was awaken VI Author Stephen Ingram |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
well, now that this is back. . . let me be among those to welcome you to Passions. . . this is an excellent poem, full of the desires of the heart. . . well done. . . hope to see more of your work. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Stephen! This is a beautiful first post, I hope to read more of your dreams ... ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Welcome to Passions, with a very nice read to start you off. Look to see you often. I know you will feel welcomed, as everyone made me feel. Well done. gentle smile |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Please be sure to check your e-mail for a special message! Karilea |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
oman awesome ending to a great poem. Welcome to Passions! |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
First, Welcome to Passions....... You have such a lovely piece here.....and many heartfelt lines...... Thank you for sharing it.... *************************** It's only me.......only me |
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