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Five Line Poems |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Tell me how far we are Is It too late To share this love tonight, When the stars are bright, I shall know why when time Is over, How quickly time go by, Without knowing the time Was there, I might be thoughtful tonight, Since the memories brought me Into tears, Being be so thoughtful And brought me the past, As the years go by fast, Flowers with the morning light, Flowers that bloom, Morning whispers, Each flower with the dew of It's way Iam trying to write in different format of a poetry and I just love writing five line poems.It's easy to write...hope you all like it. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Some interesting lines contained herein  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful my friend. . . it's good to see you working on new things. . . and expanding your horizons. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VanDana~ It is so nice to see you 'playing' with your poetic talent. Wonderful, hon ! You keep on sending us these little jewels. Most enjoyable to see poets S T R E T C H ! You sound like you had lots of fun with these.  Love n' hugs~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I like these very much, vandana. Nice work! All writing comes |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I like this! |
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