Tonight Comes - an early anniversary gift of sorts....a dedication, repost from #9

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Sunshine

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0 posted 2001-07-07 09:43 AM

Tonight Comes

In silvered slippers a spirit appears
a waft of breeze will blow her near
she is an apparition to only you
but in your reverie, what could she do?

She knows your heart, your soul, your mind
she is but a reflection of fantasies kind
she knows your pain, your hopes, it's true
she embodies the fire of golden red gone blue.

An apparition of common's sense
she may clutch your recompense
as to her you may yearn to aver
and in your fancy hold her near.

She will stroke your face and whisper
and all you will crave is just to kiss her
as her sweet siren's song is sung
and in that moment, the tonight becomes

a treasured instant, the import will pass
as you cling to memories past
in silvered slippers a spirit appears
and in your fancy, you hold her near.

©Karilea Rilling
4 August 2000

Dedicated to WY - who joined Passions on 8/4/2000

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 07-07-2001).]

ethome
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1 posted 2001-07-07 09:49 AM

Wow! This is a tender beautiful fantasy poem!

                     "An apparition of common's sense
                      she may clutch your recompense
                      as to her you may yearn to aver
                      and in your fancy hold her near.

                    She will stroke your face and whisper
                   and all you will crave is just to kiss her
                      as her sweet siren's song is sung
                   and in that moment, the tonight becomes

                   a treasured instant, the import will pass
                       as you cling to memories past
                     in silvered slippers a spirit appears
                    and in your fancy, you hold her near."

Very well done!!

serenity blaze
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2 posted 2001-07-07 09:56 AM

Perfection, Karilea.

Martie

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3 posted 2001-07-07 09:57 AM

Karilea--I'm sure he knows your thoughts are with him in this beautiful poem and dedication. Hugs!

Janet Marie
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4 posted 2001-07-07 04:11 PM

the poem couldnt be any more appropriate...
(or beautiful)
and one has to wonder the "coincidence" of the dates...
but then....not really....no need to question.
thank you for sharing this K

jm

Feels like Im dancing with truth and wisdom
Precious rhythm you are my guide
These days are sacred, my heart is humble
Oh warrior show me the light

Elizabeth

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5 posted 2001-07-07 04:23 PM

I'm sure he knows, too.....lovely words here.

Janet Marie
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6 posted 2001-07-08 02:01 PM

Feels like Im dancing with truth and wisdom
Precious rhythm you are my guide
These days are sacred, my heart is humble
Oh warrior show me the light

Mike
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7 posted 2001-07-08 02:09 PM

Beautifully written, Kansas poetess.

Victoria

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8 posted 2001-07-08 03:16 PM

a lovely gesture sunshine..thank you for posting this lovely poem..

~Victoria~

nakdthoughts
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9 posted 2001-07-08 07:52 PM

was beautiful Karilea..

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Titia Geertman
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10 posted 2001-07-08 07:57 PM

I'm sure he's silently smiling at you Karilea

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