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The Fire Of Dust
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The Fire Of Dust |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Fire Of Dust By phantoms in a mind enraged A single glow ignites its clime Burning blaze upon a stage Recited in a flow of time. Damn the fire that grazes hell And damn the feeling of insane Damn the sulfur and its smell. And damn the acids of the pain. Culminating in one bright Dooming moon to utter gloom Scorching all within its sight. Leaving spume instead to bloom. Damping sun behind the clouds Sewing webs of dreary dark Placing veils of seven shrouds Setting stone, to set a mark. It is a stone, a bust of dree Top the cinders of former we. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes. Thank you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Thank you. *L* |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
powerful my friend. . . very much so. . . excellent. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Damn the fire that grazes hell And damn the feeling of insane Damn the sulfur and its smell. And damn the acids of the pain. Culminating in one bright Dooming moon to utter gloom Scorching all within its sight. Leaving spume instead to bloom. Damping sun behind the clouds Sewing webs of dreary dark Placing veils of seven shrouds Setting stone, to set a mark. ================================== My goodness Stinky... does Randy have heart burn *L* this is intense and powerful vivid and stark like lightning strikes and yet another piece to showcase your immense gift for inner rhyme and cadence as well as turn of phrase and imagery. very cool write Sy-babes, but ya just gotta keep Randy out of the chips and beer  *winkiewinkie*  me We're all feeding our lonely like it might go away, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, Thanks for the powerful and excellent. JM, Randy was at the fire water again and insisting I help him write. He was delighted with your critique. Wimkiewinkie Stinky |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
fantastically powerful, Seymour this is a very ACTIVE piece, the language you've selected is perfection, every words bites! Enjoyed!!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Vas, When you make a meal out of the devil you have to bite real hard. LOL |
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