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Waseem Cheema
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since 2001-03-16
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Pakistan

0 posted 2001-07-07 05:11 AM




TUMHARI YAD
YOUR RECUR

Tarey janey k bad
After your departure
Dil k ujur janey k bad
After the desolation of heart
Jub tari yad
When your recur
Marey dil k durwazay pey
On the door step of my heart
Dustuk dati hey
knocks
To bin bursay badal ki tara
Then like a without rained cloud
Bin bursay, Bin bolay
Without raining, without speaking
Chupkay say
Slowly
Muj asy yah khahti hey
It says me this
Kiya tujey bi mari yad aati hey
Either you recur me as well

~Wasi~



I love to nice poetry.

[This message has been edited by Waseem Cheema (edited 07-07-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-07-07 01:08 PM


"Bin bursay, Bin bolay
Without raining, without speaking
Chupkay say
Slowly"

Wasi~   this is wonderful....so beautiful  

helen smith
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since 2001-03-12
Posts 240

2 posted 2001-07-08 08:54 PM


waseem I also think that it is beautiful  the imagery of the emotions as an unburst rain cloud  is truly  lovely
Qumar Fatthi
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since 2001-05-20
Posts 59
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3 posted 2001-07-09 03:43 PM


haon
aati hay ...lolo

caz u r my Besst friend.............

good poem...........


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