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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan 
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TUMHARI YAD YOUR RECUR Tarey janey k bad After your departure Dil k ujur janey k bad After the desolation of heart Jub tari yad When your recur Marey dil k durwazay pey On the door step of my heart Dustuk dati hey knocks To bin bursay badal ki tara Then like a without rained cloud Bin bursay, Bin bolay Without raining, without speaking Chupkay say Slowly Muj asy yah khahti hey It says me this Kiya tujey bi mari yad aati hey Either you recur me as well ~Wasi~ I love to nice poetry. [This message has been edited by Waseem Cheema (edited 07-07-2001).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Bin bursay, Bin bolay Without raining, without speaking Chupkay say Slowly" Wasi~  this is wonderful....so beautiful |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
waseem I also think that it is beautiful the imagery of the emotions as an unburst rain cloud is truly lovely |
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Qumar Fatthi Member
since 2001-05-20
Posts 59Pakistan |
haon aati hay ...lolo caz u r my Besst friend............. good poem........... |
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