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0 posted 2001-07-06 06:20 PM


the wind breaks through silent space
and whistling birds echo a lost song
tease me on a summer day just to watch me smile
like liquid desire perfectly spent
and pooling together to seek out the river
that would let us flow together through it
moments arise like flights of chaotic bliss
enveloping us within ourselves like Popples
warm within ourselves
all curled up and waiting to be snuggled with
tthese are my radiant feelings coupled together
wwith a nightime memory of youth
lloved those Popples, Pop Tarts,
and you in the 8am rush of bodies headed for class.



© Copyright 2001 Jennifer - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2001-07-06 06:33 PM


Ah Jenn ... simply put ... this made me smile. I very much enjoyed these thought processes of yours.  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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2 posted 2001-07-06 06:45 PM


ah yes. . . a memory. . . warm. . . as they should be. . .

wonderful. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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3 posted 2001-07-07 12:28 PM


Great poem Jenn, a fantastic job of "memories sweet".

If I made you smile today then I did my job!
 ~* Mysteria *~

Logan
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4 posted 2001-07-07 01:15 AM


Gentle maid, it all comes together in good memories, does it not? eh? nice flowing read to me...very gentle smile
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