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Warped Combinations of My Thought Processes
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Warped Combinations of My Thought Processes |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL 
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the wind breaks through silent space and whistling birds echo a lost song tease me on a summer day just to watch me smile like liquid desire perfectly spent and pooling together to seek out the river that would let us flow together through it moments arise like flights of chaotic bliss enveloping us within ourselves like Popples warm within ourselves all curled up and waiting to be snuggled with tthese are my radiant feelings coupled together wwith a nightime memory of youth lloved those Popples, Pop Tarts, and you in the 8am rush of bodies headed for class. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ah Jenn ... simply put ... this made me smile. I very much enjoyed these thought processes of yours.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ah yes. . . a memory. . . warm. . . as they should be. . . wonderful. . .  --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Great poem Jenn, a fantastic job of "memories sweet". If I made you smile today then I did my job! |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Gentle maid, it all comes together in good memories, does it not? eh? nice flowing read to me...very gentle smile |
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