Open Poetry #14 |
Sky Cracks |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Sky Cracks Virginia Salter I think the sky broke apart about six-ten a.m. today It cracked so loud that I have a severed heart in fray. The cats went in to hiding to save each layer of skin With breathless moments, surviving was all their daring could win. The air was still, the sky too quiet the flags stood stiff as posts And then a bang, an horrendous bang turned hearts and lives to ghosts. Then the chill of rain-clouds trill pelted soil and stone Thundered applause gave weatherman pause who found his skills need hone. And now a breeze, within the trees has come to spur the chill It’s pushed away the clouds to stay and given the sun to fill. Glistening as diamonds, each droplet on each leaf, Thwarting the storm, its motley form, perplexing the would-be thief. © July 6, 2001 |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Ah, the Pacific Northwest Not for the faint-hearted. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
described well VAS... enjoyed these shorter ones from you... |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
An excellent title....and a resounding poem.... |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
I liked this one. very descriptive. Talently done. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Excellent choice of titles, VAS. *S* I like this one a lot... very descriptive. I couldn't help but grin... my cats don't like storms, either. *G* |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Oh WOW our sky crack too just now, the sun has a lot of mending to do I guess. You are so good at these 'shorties' Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
good one, 'gin. couldn't resist the title. liked the internal rhymes, too. "As soon as the generals and the politicos can predict the motions of your mind, lose it." Wendell Berry |
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