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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
origins in start of innocence in a sense thus beginning in commence a birthing by right soft comes thy cry at night proffer then thy hand and thy word dear heart becomes my nucleus’ command and in wind wound me not but combine all given thought to this great feat as bequeathed complete in start thus beginning a birthing by right |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Deca--Interesting thoughts. Enjoyed the read. Poeminister |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I will not even begin that I claim to fully understand this poem, but I happy in my ignorance simply enjoying the flow and structure of this poem. In other words beautifully written. "across the unfair divide where black will never meet white so read my token lips as though they never exist" nicky wire [This message has been edited by brian madden (edited 05-24-2001).] |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well...I get an idea, and I loose my thoughts in more than the wind, one second they are there, the next they are gone, and I just know I lost a great idea. Well that is what I got from this, and I sure enjoyed applying your "origins" to my fleeting thoughts. ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the start of all. . . the start of life. . . the start of love. . . when? well done. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
very very well done my poetic friend  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Superb! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
very cool |
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ArticulatedSigh Junior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 26 |
It is very intersting how you mix a classic use of words in different forms and in a sense blend old and new. And always enunciate with emotive qualities undenied. Thanks For the moment swallows all things blinding our eyes to Heaven. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"in start thus beginning a birthing by right." This conclusion kind of sums it all up......I really enjoyed the whole thing! |
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