Open Poetry #14 |
Snow Dragons…part III |
EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Snow Dragons…part III "The Guardians" Descending into the frozen highlands, still haunted by the echoes from the forest Those darkest memories briefly displaced by the majestic image now before him Iced cerulean spires break through the swirling mist, glistening in the alpine sun Luminous prisms cast rainbowed beams across the land, beckons welcome deep within Monolithic pillars stand steadfast, frozen sentinels, ever watchful over the citadel of ice He descends into the churning miasma; a sense of unease envelops him, like a shroud Winds whip up the blinding snow and the earth trembles, as it struggles to breathe All around the hostile earth erupts with thunderous roar, as if the Gods cried out aloud Laid prone on the dank earth as his mount took fright, and disappeared into a smouldering crevice Fissures erupting, expelling steam and fire; monuments explode, raining down in shards of ice Ghostly sight of shadowed figures stirring through the haze, a familiar, haunting, silhouette With fearful eyes and rage filled heart, sword drawn high; called to atone, there'd be a price! Ethereal demons, akin to naught ever seen before, thought loosed to reign an unceasing terror A quickening, an almost soundless movement, more sensed than seen through half blinded eye A startled cry, an impulsive pivot, and wild slashing thrust of that lethal sword, catching flesh Took just one look and the knight he knew, 'twas the day today, and he was here to die! All around now, clearly seen they lumbered closer, across the cold, and blood soaked ground With their eyes aflame and nostrils flared, their circle of fear engulfed, there'd be no retreat Desired not mischief, merely took fright from the storm, but a careless stroke had laid her down Cut down in flight, mortally wounded by that brutal blow, a youthful Dragon lay dying at his feet "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
WOWSERS Eagle... you went for the imagery in this big time this is so cool...the saga continues... and with clever masterful storytelling. well done poet sir. take care, watch out for those dragons. jm We're all feeding our lonely like it might go away, |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Eagle One, this is great! I hate to admit it, but I am sometimes hoping the dragon wins. What a picture of words you have given to us. Please say this isn't the last one!! Take care, friend, ME |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I was beginning to wonder if you were gonna post this one...splendiferous my friend |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Your pen never ceases to amaze me my friend...you keep telling me that these don't come easy...I think if you would stop fighting me and agree that you ARE a poet they would stop making you work so hard Love you my friend...this is awesome! |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Janet ~ I think you to kind my poet friend, but I do thank you. Always watching, you just never know with those Dragons. M E ~ Stay tuned! The final chapter is just around the corner and you never can tell what will happen when Dragons are involved. Paula ~ So was I Paula, I'm still not entirely happy with this one, but…! Butterflies ~ As always my dear friend your biased words are most welcomed. I've come to think that deep down we are ALL poets. You take care my friend! "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EagleOne~ 'He descends into the churning miasma; a sense of unease envelops him' How very, very descriptive ! The air of mystery draws me on to the next~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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