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Open Poetry #14

Drop

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-07-06 05:02 AM

Drop

in a drop
of water
is a world
of it's own
under a
microscope
only there
to be shown
add that drop
of water
to the ocean
or the sea
there it swims
wild and free

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2001-07-06 05:15 AM

This is a very good poem from the miniscule to the awe inspiring waters of the earth!

Waseem Cheema
Member

since 2001-03-16

Posts 369
Pakistan

2 posted 2001-07-06 05:46 AM

Very beautiful ....... small poems always attract me..........

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2001-07-06 08:27 AM

yes it is all about scale and perspective... nicely done..as usual.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2001-07-06 08:29 AM

You've read my thoughts...but put them together much better than me...

jwesley

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-07-07 08:15 PM

in a drop of words
you've shown
that the world
is how we see it

wonderful helen. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

6 posted 2001-07-07 08:53 PM

Very lovely abd true.

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