Open Poetry #14 |
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O' When Willow Dances |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores ![]() |
O' When Willow Dances ~*Marge Tindal*~ ![]() Once across a memory swirling Willowed breezes now unfurling Grace of face ~ serenity laced Caress of tress abandons place Softly spills in rapturous recall Carefreed beckoning spirits call Cascade of night feathers light O' When Willow dances ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ah...I just love when you mention my name...and Willow is among my favorites...the weeping willow most especially, so poetic and romantic...if you think I jest, well, it's a natural for outdoor pleasures...grin...I'm loving this peaceful mood tonight...thanks m.o.m.s. ![]() |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I love the feel of this......like wind in the leaves kinda soft and sweet ![]() |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh does this love me~and yanno I love that music, it is my favorite. Now let's go to the graphic is that something? And the poem, does it tie it all together into the most exquisite package or what? I kept this one for my Tori for later, it was simply lovely Marge. If I made you smile today then I did my job! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- This is so soft and serene. How did you know I needed this tonight? ![]() A tender lullaby to my heart... I truly love it.. ![]() hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 07-06-2001).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
From the picture I'd say Willow was a very classy dancer as you have described in such an eloquent way! |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ When willows weep, all the earth is stirred in gentle sway of serenity. SEA~ She is a softly blown spirit. Mysteria~ She dances in the spirit of Jannea~ ![]() Vicky~ Her spirit is now known~ ![]() ETHome~ I have come to know that she is indeed just that. ~*Marge*~ ![]() ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Simply fantastic! Well, maybe not so simple, but truly fantastic. |
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Lady In White![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Willows hold a special magic, all their own, from their roots, to their tendrils... and you, my friend, have captured a bit of their magic, here.... well done, Marge! |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I had to read it again and see that picture! Coincidence, not likely...sending this over to her daughter to see it just "in case", thanks for this Marge. And Lady In White is so right, Willows are so special from their roots to their tendrils, so special! If I made you smile today then I did my job! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--lovely image you have given me with this poem. Thankyou! |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Peace and serenity sway among the leaves. To emulate a tree. Beautiful!!! |
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Soaringeagle Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 156CANADA |
A CHERISHED CREATION MARGE THANKS FOR YOUR SHARING WAYS |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Music??? What music? suthern's always missing something... including her mind. *G* Even without music, this is a beauty, Marge... peaceful, serene, and very lovely. *S* |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ Ever so much, I thank you. LadyInWhite~ On tender tendrils of thought she makes her journey. Mysteria~ I know ... *Hugs* Martie~ *Hugs* This one has the kiss of an angel spirit~ Shadow~ Thank you. SoaringEagle~ The ways of the heart are not difficult to show. I love you. SuthernGal~ You will hear the music of my heart then. Thank you dear lady. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
As it is Jenna's (Willow's) funeral today and is the finale of her dance, I had to read this poem this morning as I will never, ever get over how much this picture looks like her, nor will I ever get over the timing of this poem with her death, and the fact that she was in the Royal Ballet for years. Strange things happen for a reason beyond our understanding sometimes. Marge, thank you for this wonderful poem, her family treasures it as do I. If you have a choice to sit down or dance, dance! |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: This is so moving and stirs all kinds of mysterious thoughts in me. Just beautiful! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ Just needing you to know ... she stirs among us~ In gentle remembering~ BettyLou~ Thank you so much for feeling her spirt move~ *I just needed to touch this one for me tonight~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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