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Presence of a Prayer---repost for gentle friend Logan
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Presence of a Prayer---repost for gentle friend Logan |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Have you never felt it there in the silence of aware upon the neck - antennae hair – profound presence of a prayer (someone loves me) sends me greet oil poured, most savory, upon my unbecoming feet Someone’s out there. Someone cares. Knowledge speaks within the night yanking blanket of despair-- someone prayed for me tonight. Thanks Logan. Aman Cara! |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Ah wonderful, a present of a prayer. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
most appropriate post for the all seeing, all knowing gentle poet... me thinks he has "eyes that see on thru"  in fact me would be me raspberry tea on it. beautiful prayer of soul me twin "gentle smiles" to you both.  meWe're all feeding our lonely like it might go away, |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, for once, I don't know what to say, except, I am very touched, Serenity, and very humbled by this post..Thank you from the depths..Anam Cara..very tender gentle smile to a most gentle soul |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ 'Have you never felt it there in the silence of aware' Ah, little friend~ You know I have~ Softness becomes this piece of you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now Marge about said all there is to say, if you have "felt" it! How lovely this was, and knowing Logan he is humbled by the jesture.Anam Cara Serenity, know someone cares! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"Have you never felt it there in the silence of aware upon the neck - antennae hair – profound presence of a prayer" I do so like that description Celeste....and Yes! Great poem! |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Yes.....I felt so many times........ but... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wonderful words Serenity ... jwesley [This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 07-06-2001).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Ah serenity! you are a friend to the soul indeed, this soft write proves it. Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
This is beautiful...I especially love the beginning. Very tender poem Hugs, ~Krista |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Well done, Serenity.... anam cara on.... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I would like to thank everyone---but Logan? you my friend, are a wiper of tears. It's my pleasure to meet you (again, gentle smile) |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
*sigh* Serenity. This is beautiful. Its wonderful to see so many people gaining such a wonderful friend. May I say this is a wonderful poem? wonderful then..I love this, and this is what I was needing tonight. A gentle reminder that people are out there indeed. Thank you. |
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