Vidalia....repost....for Doreen.....

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Open Poetry #14

Vidalia....repost....for Doreen.....

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-07-03 02:56 PM

Vidalia
~
/
A thin
layer  of
skin  wraps  and
warps  around  thee
hiding  so  many  other
layers  of  sweet,  sweet  taste
O  Vidalia,  sweet  song  of  taste  in
layer  upon  layer  of  opaque  design  by
His  own  hand,  forever  command  all  taste
buds  this  luscious,  delicious,  delightful  delicacy
Georgian  luxuries  cannot  compete  the  love  complete
betwixt  mouth  and  sweetest  onion’s  skin,  a  devilment
of  joy  itself,  complete  union  with  onion’s  ting  and  bite
so raw  and  sugared  just  so,  wrapped  with  butter  and
bread  ah sweeter  still  when  whitest  flesh  hits  the  heat
all  sugars  come to  the  forefront  and  luscious  luscious
luscious  thrills  of  magic  bulbous  satisfaction  in  each
face  a  reaction  to  heaven’s gift,  of  you  O  lovely,
lovely,  sweet  Vidalia  we  are  yet  so  glad
heaven  made  ya.
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\\\\\\

brian madden
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ireland

1 posted 2001-07-03 03:09 PM

Karilea, can not say I am fan of Vidalia. Though I am uncultured mule who thinks the guitar is a classical instrument lol I did however love this piece.

"Like Sand underneath the snow, I make you mine." Kristin Hersh

doreen peri
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Virginia

2 posted 2001-07-07 01:53 AM

*smile* thank you for the layers.... this was oh so sweet the first time and even sweeter now...................... you are a wonderful friend and a fine poet.....

cpalmer
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Phoenix, Az

3 posted 2001-07-07 02:07 AM

Okay I am not much of a vidalia fan but I love the writing! very nice
hugs
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

[This message has been edited by cpalmer (edited 07-07-2001).]

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-07-07 02:15 AM

Karilea~
I'm a Vidalia onion fan~
A Doreen fan~
A Sunshine fan~
A Karilea fan~
Among others

Heck, I'm just a blooming onion fan ! !
Good show, poetess !
I thought this was fantasma !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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