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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-07-05 08:00 PM



little successes and good days

waking up ~
alternative:  not…
a little success

goes a long way to
making my day…

from there, it’s all up…

so a good day is
finding yet another treasure
to add to those now shelved
in my space

finding McKuen a home

although I’m sure
he is no longer
a man alone

and I wouldn’t strip him
of bits and parts
already in
his past

I have to admit, the grin was
wide today

as Stanyan Street & Other Sorrows
became mine,
and a bigger find of
The World of Rod McKuen,
music and lyrics

joined the swelling ranks
of treasures…

gracing my shelves

the only other part that made
my day complete…

sharing smiles…

so color me golden
then, as we
listen to the warm
coming close to the earth
with love

where
celebrations of the heart
are found in
lonesome cities
while
fields of wonder
are
caught in the quiet

and we read aloud,
you and I,
recapturing
love


© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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1 posted 2001-07-05 08:07 PM


Kari..this touches close to home for me...Listen to the Warm has certain significance for me (You might remember?)...this is going in my library my friend...THANK YOU for it - it's beautiful..and moves me.

K

I am a refugee of logic...insisting
on unlikely land with every step.


catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
2 posted 2001-07-05 08:36 PM


I'm happy to see you had some successes in the search. Very nice to read this, you do know that his influence is seen in your words often.
Sandra

Jamie
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Blue Heaven
3 posted 2001-07-05 09:21 PM


This one left me with a smile..thanks

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

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4 posted 2001-07-06 08:33 AM


sounds like you found treasure indeed...

nicely done...


jwesley
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5 posted 2001-07-06 08:37 AM


We all need those 'little successes and good says' sometime don't we, and you brought them into play in that wonderful way you have...

jwesley

Kethry
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6 posted 2001-07-06 09:10 AM


Sunshine,
nobody does McKuen, like you're a doin
Keth

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life.  Patty Hansen.



Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
7 posted 2001-07-06 09:12 AM


Sunshine,
Nice read, enjoyed. *L*

Severn
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8 posted 2002-06-01 10:29 PM


just re-reading..
Jamie
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Blue Heaven
9 posted 2002-06-01 10:49 PM


just re-living

one of these tuesdays......

passing shadows
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displaced
10 posted 2003-01-14 02:29 AM


thanks for this
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