Open Poetry #14 |
Evening's Begun--now with pic |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Evening’s Begun Virginia Salter Summer, sweet summer sailing azure waters ‘cross iridescent waves ‘neath powder-blue sky schooners, clippers crisscross to the breezes, list, fly, settle at peace in-tandem two sail southward trio heads north methodically Puget Sound fills sunset worshipers gather in anticipation © July 10, 2000 [This message has been edited by VAS (edited 07-05-2001).] |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Thank you for that little soul trip I needed it! Beautifully written...great imagery! ~Krista "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thank you Smitten Kitten, I'm so happy you enjoyed this one. I have a photo that I took that evening, it's in jpg format. Do you know how I can include it with this piece? [This message has been edited by VAS (edited 07-05-2001).] |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
See it worked, glad I was able to help you. Lovely poem and pic by the way Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Mote Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 31 |
Beautifully done, Virgina, enjoyed the read. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
What a way with words you have! Lovely! Take care, Melissa~ |
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Kirksters Junior Member
since 2001-07-01
Posts 47 |
Thank you for the poem, beautifully writen. I used to teach sailing, and miss it. You brought back a lot of memories. Thanks |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Love this one, Virginia. The pic is beautiful! It all reminds me of the few fortunate weeks I have spent on the shores Grand Traverse Bay on Lake Michigan. There are always tall ships, sailboats, and fishing boats out in the water. Lovely sights. Thanks for the memory! All writing comes |
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