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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-07-05 06:27 AM

Sands of Forgiveness

listen to the
winds blow
telling all the secrets
it knows
about the grains of sand
under feet
laughing
as beach and water
meet
washed in forgiveness
of the past
from depths of water
oh so vast
a new sin
washes ashore
of the same
it is now your turn
to forgive
the blame

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2001-07-05 06:40 AM

forgiveness and blame..to me two words that cause so much pain...when needed.
Well written as always in your style

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

2 posted 2001-07-05 07:08 AM

The sands of time hold both the scares of blame and the ointments of forgiveness. The wind carries the air of peace and the words, reflections of povity, guilt,properity; the goods and bads of the world around us.

I really enjoyed your peice, I felt its, your passion and deep thoughts.

Well done, hope to read more.

Rick

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2001-07-05 08:18 AM

very nice..but I have come to expect as much from you... always a pleasure to read your pennings...

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2001-07-05 09:16 AM

Nice verse with nice thoughts. We must all forgive ... most importantly we must forgive ourselves.
Isn't it a wonderful feeling when we have washed that burden away?

g-hm
Member

since 2001-05-16

Posts 85

5 posted 2001-07-05 04:02 PM

Where would we be without forgiveness?
A wonderful tool.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-07-05 04:05 PM

There is much peace to be found in forgiveness, helen. Great work here.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

7 posted 2001-07-05 07:32 PM

That'll be the day...sincere attempt appreciated. Very cool write!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-07-05 09:27 PM

well spoken helen. . .

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bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

9 posted 2001-07-06 04:44 PM

my reply: /pip/Forum48/HTML/003285.html

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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