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Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2001-05-24 12:23 PM

May the farce
end with you,
bringer of death
to our aspiring star
alien invader
cloaked in darkness
laying waste our home,
another casualty of
your thermal detonating
carelessness

you move on to
spread your "good will"
Ambassador of evil,
to other worlds
yet, there is another
One who will avenge
a son rising up
against his father
with knowledgeable eyes
strength, who's light
will devastate you
so that this farce
Your farce,
may finally end
with you...

~Tier
5/01

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-05-24 01:12 PM

wow . . . powerful Tier. . . the son rising up against the father. . .

well done. . .

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Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

2 posted 2001-05-24 02:29 PM

Thanks, Sven, just a little venting here...

:-)

~Tier

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

3 posted 2001-05-24 03:20 PM

Tier, please, vent more often...the innuendos in this piece were quite remarkable...

and the metaphors, exquisite!

Vent away!

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2001-05-24 09:38 PM

Superbly done. So filled with powerfilled statements from the true Source, I'd say.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-05-24 10:21 PM

very creative!!!!!

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

6 posted 2001-05-25 10:00 AM

Thank you, Decaflame, I appreciated the comment and compliment.

Superb? Wow! that's a great compliment coming from you, Virginia, thank you! And you are correct, all of my poems are from the true source... my heart, my feelings.

Thank you, Irish Rose, I do try! *smiles*

~Tier

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

7 posted 2001-05-25 11:54 AM

I related this to something personnal going on in my own life...it fit perfectly.

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