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...The daydream...
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...The daydream... |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
 The sky is endless A horizon blue The day is light A gleam in golden hue While in this daydream You and I are bound As I gaze beyond The passing clouds Unveiling a trail Of romance we share You once asked me Why I looked so sad And in a whisper I answered back It's a feeling I have Buried deep inside You're getting closer To my heart You kiss my lips Strange feelings take hold And in that moment Emotions swirl Rejoycing in truth As soulmates we're joined You ask me now Where my love is gone And I answer back Embraced by your heart... coco*~* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Your getting closer to my heart. You kiss my lips." Those kisses will do it every time...soul kisses...James |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Where all love should be...but so seldom finds itself! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
To be sung to the tune of John Lennon's "OhYoko" "OhCoco" "OhCoco" My ezboard community Try my lil Forum! [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 07-05-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CoCoBaci~ So good to see you in the wee small hours. Now it looks like 'home' .... You and your gentle poetry have been missed. Beautiful 'coming home' piece. *Hugs*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Ah soft, and romantic thoughts gliding....love this very much, Coco. Congrats on 2000!! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
You ask me now Where my love is gone And I answer back Embraced by your heart... beautiful Coco...very ((hugs)) Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Coco ... this is so lovely! Beautiful and tender sentiments to warm the heart, much enjoyed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
 COCO IS BACK!!!   Welcome home me girlie-girl ... and this beauty, this tender render is classic Coco ... whisper soft words written with a gentle pen Beautiful. missed you around here!!  We're all feeding our lonely like it might go away, |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nice.... enjoyed the gentle flow ...with some great lines... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Welcome back ... and with a bang! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
You ask me now where my love is gone and I answer back embraced by your heart" ~Awwwww! How lovely! I love this Take care, Melissa~ |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Welcome home, Coco....this is a lovely, lovely gift from you..... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Coco...so good to see you again. What a lovely poem this is too! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
coco, I've missed ya. beautifully written piece. "Like Sand underneath the snow, I make you mine." Kristin Hersh |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
When I read each of your responses to this lil poem this morning I can honestly say I got a sense of a true friendship embrace and you made my smile an even brighter one 2day... My sincere thanx to all my dearPoetFriends for your neverending kindness and friendship... Hugs2Ualways *~coco~* |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Lovely sentiments, Coco. Welcome back!! All writing comes |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Coco, this is very sweet, speaking of a special love. Nice to read you again.. Sandra |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and this is why we miss you so!!! Every work you post might as well be have your fingerprints on it! I celebrate your homecoming my friend!!! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
WOLF... I'm soooooooooo happy 2 see you pass thru here and please accept my thanx 4 your warm welcome back2me CAT... I've decided I'm calling you that PoetFriend and I've read a poem of your's the other nite that caught my attention and clutched hold of my heart so in ways some of the words you PoetFriends share here inspire us readers to write lil poems kinda like this SERENITY... only you and one other could say something like that to me and I take it to heart honestly, as your friendship is treasured each day that passes by so on that note I'm gonna do what us french italians do well.. "MUAAAHonCHEEKS 2uGurl" cuz you're just2Sweet2me... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ahhhhhhhh. . . now this is what I needed Coco. . . you're just too wonderful my PoetFriend. . . good to see you back. . . this has that delicate touch that only you can give. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sven sweetie, when you stop by and read a lil poem I write ya know what... your replies ALWAYS make me smile Thank you DearPoetFriend for your kindness I shall always treasure... Sweet2BhomeAgain |
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