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Open Poetry #14

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Rodney Belcher
Member

since 2000-06-06

Posts 227
Taylor, Michigan

0 posted 2001-07-04 11:03 PM

You make me sick
To think I once loved you
Makes me wonder about my sanity
And if I’m as smart as people think
You don’t know what love is
Once I wanted to be with you forever
To be with you come heaven or hell
Now I’m glad you are on your own
You deserve to be lonely
For what you have done to me
I don’t wish you were dead
As far as I’m concerned
You already are

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2001-07-05 02:59 PM

Wow! Bitter and angry! Well I wouldn't dwell on this too long as it will eat your guts out!......But keep writing as the release will save your soul!

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2001-07-05 03:24 PM

I agree with ethome, wholly. Often, we do adopt a 'sour grapes' attitude just for survival. I must say, though, Rodney,you certainly have written very powerfully and succinctly!

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-07-05 03:59 PM

Wow, very bitter. Ouch! I hope it gets better for you real soon.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2001-07-05 04:37 PM

"Makes me wonder about my sanity."
I find myself in this place to many times it seems...the same methods always apply...you got yourself into this now get yourself out...James

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