Open Poetry #14 |
Another Day Over |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
A lone seagull flies towards the horizon Guided by the setting sun Such serenity there is by the ocean As the day is nearly over and done This beautiful day has all but ended Soon the water will change from gold to blue As the sun will be replaced And the moon will come into full view The last light of the day we will savour A glow of gold outlines your face Soon our footprints in the sand Will be gone without leaving a trace But another day awaits us tomorrow In your arms is where I now belong As the sun sinks below the horizon And all traces of the day are now gone Suetang |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
what a beautiful day and lovely moments, a good read. Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Such a lovely poem needs another go. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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WhiteDragon Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 70O-town, Fl |
A very lovely poem, indeed... Ahh, walks on the beach with a loved one. Haven't done that yet God BLess, Jeremy |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all for reading this and I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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