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Open Poetry #14

4 July 2001

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-07-04 07:47 AM

liquid air surrounds
coo of mourning doves first greet
anticipation

palest sky of blue
celebrations to see through
before dark explodes

in rocket's red glare
bombs bursting through summer air
Veterans, thank you

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2001-07-04 12:15 PM

Very nicely done, and of course the last stanza is my favorite.

If I made you smile today then I did my job!
~* Mysteria *~

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2001-07-04 12:23 PM

I like it, short yet patriotic to the max!!

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

3 posted 2001-07-09 06:17 PM

A bit late, but then, better be late than never. Yet another one to my likes.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

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