Open Poetry #14 |
Title poem - can't help it, too much fun to do |
Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Can you whisper softly to me? I've lost my mind Who is to blame? My migraine Listening for words When the storm hits The many of me Sorry I have to go Where I go In my next life Nutty as a fruitcake You know me more than anyone I promise When you're not there Keeper of the stones Never forget who loved you best Am I a Poet? Sometimes I want The mind's eye No words Where I go In my next life Make me a memory I rest my head A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Titia~ Delightfully done ! I found me. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Titia, Enjoyed and I rest my case. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
The patience it must have taken to do this...amazes me. Very cool! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Marge, I can do this forever, it's so much fun Seymour, thanks JLR, it doesn't take that much time A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
being a little slow on the uptake..I couldn't for the life of me figure out what this was....then I finally figured it out... too clever... enjoyed this!! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Brava, Titia Well done indeed! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Thanks to you all. Try one yourself you'll enjoy doing it. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
am I to understand, Titia, that is a string of clichés woven together to tell a tale? |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Hello VAS, this 'poem' is made out of the titles of poems submitted on Passions. Few months ago someone started and once in a while I make one, it's nice to do, nothing serious though, just fun. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
hehe, Titia this is awesome! And I have no idea why it made me smile so much that my poem title is in there ah well...the small delights in life eh? Very cool idea! ~Krista "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh Titia, you are so clever, and now that took a lot of time to work all those in there, so I thank you from the bottom of my heart for working me into your story, and I kept it and feel truly honored to have shared as part of your work. Thank you and a great job! If I made you smile today then I did my job! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
And you've done a great job compiling these! I loved the whole idea....well done!! |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Yah ...........I Can whisper softly ....LOL ..... Titia |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Compliled wonderfully Titia..gonna have to try this... jwesley |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Thanks very much all of you. Glad you liked them Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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