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Open Poetry #14

What I Feel

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

0 posted 2001-07-04 04:51 PM

What I Feel
~*~
What I feel, you feel too
I sing of you, I breathe you
I invite you into my soul
to become one
I am mad to connect
with the surge of promise
pounding like stones
my heart can’t take the drama
yet begs the song to never end

BloomingRose

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-07-04 04:53 PM

...I am mad to connect...

the Passion in this speaks in a whisper, loudly....

RSWells
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since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

2 posted 2001-07-04 04:58 PM

We race to a place as children wishing to grow up quickly then want time suspended. Enjoyed.

"Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve"

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

3 posted 2001-07-05 09:23 AM

Thanks, I think the mood was in the music.

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

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California

4 posted 2001-07-06 11:01 PM

You have a marvelous way with words that truly sing.

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-07-07 12:17 PM

and always asks for more. . .

wonderfully done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

6 posted 2001-07-07 03:12 PM

B.R.--

beautiful...soft sentiments from the
heart. i heard this one "sing".
take care.
amy

"but i see your true colors,
shining through...
i see your true colors
and that's why i love you"
~phil collins~

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2001-07-07 05:55 PM

enjoy

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

8 posted 2001-07-15 07:14 PM

Thanks all. Love ya!
Deb

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