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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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Canada Rose  Boogie holiday sway time for Canada Day! celebrating our nation's pride as freedom whispers o'er scarlet petals hey! shake what your mama gave ya! dance with waves of passion watch maple flag boogie   By Melissa P. Monette ~ ~ ~ A rictameter is similar to a cinquain it consists of 2, 4, 6, 8, 10, 8, 6, 4, 2 syllable lines the first and last line must coincide  Please also check out "Heaven - In Honour Of Canada Day" /pip/Forum48/HTML/002883.html |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Great write Melissa. You swing girl!  Happy Canada Day. Interesting a rictameter. Perhaps something for the next Workshop? |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Love that swinin' rose! Roses are my favorite....headed to canada for the first time...now Im imspired! Cindi God is our inspiration |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Melissa, Very good enjoyed. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I went to Canada in 1973 on my honeymoon, it is a lovely country. This is beautiful also! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ Simple delight is done in rictametered rhyme endearing hearts in pleasured parts celebration of dance has now begun boogie across the stage, my dear booty-shaking dancer breathtakingly Simple You ROCK, CanadaGirl ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful!!!! An excellent tribute. . . ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Margie-girl what a perfect lil' reply! Love ya! Thank you all for celebrating Canada with me, your replies are greatly appreciated on this special day! It was fun to pen this lil' ditty  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I'm here, I'm here, it's boogie time, and I got me dancin shoes on! A little Canadian eh, from Vancouver, B.C. Boogie woogie, giggle puss, yup that's me! I got my little flag, and some sparklers too, Want to boogie to our freedom with you! Let's sing out to our country loud and proud, You and me Melissa will stand out in the crowd, 'Cause we've got "Passions Power" inside our soul, Go girl, shake your bootie, shimmy up that flag pole! Okay, okay, so it's forced!  Just kidding! Perfectly done Melissa, and Happy Canada Day! If I have made you smile today, then I have done my job! ~* Mysteria *~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Melissa, you little devil!  This is great.... blows my image of you completely!! This could be the only Canada Day poem ever written that says "shake what your momma gave ya!"  I love it!!! |
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The Exile Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 52Ontario, Canada |
Oh my, this is just TOTALLY AWESOME!!! Nice job Melissa!! I agree with Balladeer that "shake what your mama gave ya" was just cool!! :-) LOL |
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