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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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my thoughts turn to you in the wind carried away thoughts of love I love you miss you I miss you love you thoughts of love carried away in the wind turn to you my thoughts --------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
And I have found the wind to be a very good carrier of such thoughts, so am sure it delivered this time as well, nicely written..gentle smile |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sven...so much...in so little... shhh....the wind is talking.... beautiful! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven, I know of those thoughts also, but they usually pass through my brain at the speed of light, pushed by a wind that meets no resistance inside my head. Thanks for giving my thoughts pause. *HuGGLeS* Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, Short and sweet, enjoyed. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it ,my friend  |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
What a wonderful form you wrote this poem in, saying so much with so little words. I must try that too some day. Enjoyed this much Sven! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Understanding this. Beautiful flow. Sandra |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
oh....yes.......Let your thoughts and your words sing with all the colors of the winds... That gentle wind will surely treasure that song.....  Thank you ***************************** It's only me.......only me |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sven, I can relate to this so much. And sometimes love can be written in the wind, you must catch it before it breezes by. Enjoyed very much... Love, Elise |
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Blaec Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 130The Sunshine State |
How simple and wonderful! |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
I love the form! Very unique. And of course I love the content as well All and all, an awesome poem!~Krista "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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Fancy Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 189TN/USA |
...whispers of the wind carry many messages on its wings...we but have to listen... "...don't ever stop loving, don't ever stop believing, don't ever stop dreaming your dreams..." |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Or dust in the wind...was absorbed by this! |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
The wind that took your thoughts hopefully will return with thoughts from her to you. Or it is just a lot of hot air blowing around. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Logan, thank you my friend. . . Sunshine, I'm listening. . . thank you. . . Kethry, you're welcome my friend. . . glad that you enjoyed. . . Sy, thank you for reading my friend. . . vandana, glad that you enjoyed. . . Munda, thank you. . . just trying some new things out. . . I've been working on say a lot with a little. . . Sandra, I knew that you would understand. . . thank you. . . Enchanted Melody, I'm sure that it will. . . thank you. . . Elise, thank you, I know. . . that's why I have this windmill!! SK, thank you!! Glad that you enjoyed. . . Fancy, I've always listened. . . thank you my friend. . . JLR, no dust in this wind. . . thank you. . . inot2b, I hope that someday, the wind will return those thoughts. . . thank you my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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