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The Journey Of The Heart
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The Journey Of The Heart |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Journey Of The Heart The journey of a heart departs…in the genesis of its start. In the mystery of beginnings…and self conscious inner springs In the embryo and its strife…and the essence of its life In the ripples of the rhyme…in the sands that spill its time The journey of the outer rind…is a journey of the mind. A sensing of the mortal things…the convolutions that it brings The sailing of the moon and sun…melding of the one on one The ghosts of all that’s gone before…the spirit of the evermore The mystery of the stars above…the mystic of the feel of love How ecstasy and agonies employ…the corrosiveness that destroys? The endless echoes of ensue…the change on change of redo. The wastefulness of every all…the abyss in which we fall The need to clarify our head…the ghosts that stay and lay our bed The payment for the taste of thrill…the final of the searching will. The raging of the resolute…the bowing to the absolute Searching for that endless goal…opening the door of soul. The journey of a heart begins…in the awesome of its art. In the mystery of beginnings…and self conscious of its start [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 07-04-2001).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Where may I purchase the ticket, Sy? This is a journey of all journeys, and I don't want ya'll to leave without me... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The journey of a heart departs…in the genesis of its start. In the mystery of beginnings…and self conscious inner springs In the embryo and its strife…and the essence of its life In the ripples of the rhyme…in the sands that spill its time The journey of the outer rind…is a journey of the mind. A sensing of the mortal things…the convolutions that it brings The sailing of the moon and sun…melding of the one on one The ghosts of all that’s gone before…the spirit of the evermore The mystery of the stars above…the mystic of the feel of love =============================== The need to clarify our head…the ghosts that stay and lay our bed The payment for the taste of thrill…the final of the searching will. The raging of the resolute…the bowing to the absolute Searching for that endless goal…opening the door of soul. The journey of a heart begins…in the awesome of its art. In the mystery of beginnings…and self conscious of its start ================================== OHHOWILOVEWHENYOUWRITELIKETHIS!! RHYME DIVINE & WISDOM ETCHED IN TIME, this is CLASSIC Sy poetry ... and the reason I hang on every word... When we take a journey in your mind.. we go to Eden and Shangri-la... we fly to the moon and sail to the sun walk your beaches of understand and see all that destiny has planned. VERY COOL write Stinky... Your muse returns with gifted grace and cool class. Happy 4th me sweet... find that tinkerbell-shell yet?  *winkiewinkie*  meWe're all feeding our lonely like it might go away, Like the doors of heaven will swing wide open if we just find the right words to say. ~E. McCain [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 07-04-2001).] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
What a spectacular journey you have shared with us here, Sy. Wonderful!!  All writing comes |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, You will never be left behind. *L* JM, Oh yes, Tinker Bells shell is right here on my desk. It's my direct line to the naive. Winkiewinkie Stinky Lone Wolf, Big thanks for a small poem. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ I was going to say ... You've left me speechless Then I thought ... how shallow is that ! If you could find so many beautiful phrases ... surely I can find a few words to tell you how stunning I think this is ! 'The sailing of the moon and sun…melding of the one on one The ghosts of all that’s gone before…the spirit of the evermore' My gentle stars, man ... you've penned such thoughts of journey that would cause a mind to begin packing for the trip ! You are a full suitcase, Seymour Tabin. Let the journey begin ! ! Much love to you, your musing mind and heart of kind. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, We are on the journey now. And I wave to you in passing flight, for I see your candle in the night. *L* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
  To fly to the land of naive one needs only to believe *winkiewinkie*  We're all feeding our lonely like it might go away, |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
well written Mr. Tabin. enjoyed. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, To fly to the land of naive one needs only to believe What a magical mind. Love ya, Sy Mike, Thank you Mike. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
"The mystery of the stars above…the mystic of the feel of love" "The raging of the resolute…the bowing to the absolute" More wonderful words I have never heard on love and the loss of a love You speak my heart The absolute is the painful, even when we understand the why Liz |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy...Is it alright if I just say, amazing? AMAZING!!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Your words remind me of someone I still love. Thank you Sy Martie, You are the sweetest. *L* |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
This Sir, is a truly great poem! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sy, wow this just left me speechless. Am I ever glad that I caught this one today....much needed words to be read today, I find your wisdom to be nothing short of incredible. Thank you for this one. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
This is stunning work, Sey! Art, it is art. Cor |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Munda, Thank you for such a flattering comment. Gentle Spitit, My very humble thanks. Corinne, Thank you love. |
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