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OLIAS
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since 2000-06-20
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Pearl city Iowa

0 posted 2001-07-03 07:15 PM



From an English Boy to an American girl, for the 4th of July. A Nation that produces a wonderful woman like you, can't be all bad (lol). I'll be celebrating with you tomorrow.


Where my heart is (for Judy) Repost from open 8.
            
From Blake's "satanic mills" I come
where industry first scarred this sceptre'd Isle,
Innocent of "Camberley heavy with bells"
my pores seep coal and calluses of swarf,
My mudded boots entrenched, in cobblestones and slag,
But my heart ascends through caustic clouds cocoon
to a distant shore,
'Cross Mississippi's bright ribbon
and on, through waving corns expanse
to Her,
My field of Dreams,
A daughter of pioneers who work the land
and I a son of steam and soot,
So different, so alike
our heritage of Plymouth Rock is found,
Our Future to be as one.

Olias






© Copyright 2001 Mick Yates - All Rights Reserved
Passions Voice
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since 2000-10-23
Posts 291
Michigan
1 posted 2001-07-03 07:35 PM


Just goes to show you that love knows no boundaries.

I love it.

passion is life. . . ~Diana


Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
2 posted 2001-07-03 09:47 PM


Olias,

this was a beatiful story of love
and magic. really liked the history
telling in this one. a keeper for sure!
take care.
amy  

"but i see your true colors,
shining through...
i see your true colors
and that's why i love you"
~phil collins~

Shelby Olivia
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 25

3 posted 2001-07-04 08:36 AM


Thank you my English.

              Love,
                Flower

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
4 posted 2001-07-04 08:41 AM


What a love[ly] letter....
Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
5 posted 2001-07-04 09:42 AM


Lovely work, Olias.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

JLR
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since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785

6 posted 2001-07-05 12:37 PM


What a sweet thing to do for someone you love.  And I really liked the descriptiveness of this!
OLIAS
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since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa
7 posted 2001-07-05 10:30 AM


Passion Voice,
Thank you for responding , I'm glad you liked.

Aimster,
Your very kind I'm happy you enjoyed this, be well poet friend.

Shelby Olivia,
Soon be October Flower, no more internet chat for six whole weeks, kiss.

Sunshine,
Thanks for replying, I'm glad you liked.

Lone Wolf,
I'm glad you enjoyed its form the heart, thank you.

JLR,
I'm happy you enjoyed this I wasn't sure about borrowing from Blake and betchemin but it seems to work. Thanks for your kind reply.

Regards and Thank you to all,
Olias.

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