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Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2001-07-03 05:21 PM

U’s of  U’s

they say
it is not possible
    to be
all things
             to all
people

they

don’t know

                         you…

in touching

                          you

I’ve learned

truth

compassion

kindness

caring

devotion

love

not easy to give
sometimes less easy to
get

but you added

elements

to all of the above

first, you added

                                unconditional….

so now I stand

absolute in your light
no restrictions to what I
might give back

it is unreserved, and
unconditional…

but then you did one more
thing….

you tied it up, presented it
all….

with

                                understanding…

unconditional understanding….

so, naked of all
pretense
to stand before you,
come I,
in this light,
will you please accept

mine….

that, and all that I might give you

                        till the end of time.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-07-03 05:45 PM

Will you put it in writing?

Contractual, you know ... enforceable.
Wonderful passion in these words. Why am I the first to comment?
Wow!

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-07-03 05:48 PM

I agree..passionate and lovely words. Well written and expressive it captures an essence that it missing in many people's lives...

Great write here!!!!

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

3 posted 2001-07-03 06:24 PM

so, naked of all
pretense
to stand before you,
come I,
in this light,
will you please accept

mine….

that, and all that I might give you

till the end of time.

=================================

What a wonderful touching thoughts you've penned here........
And you are certainly lucky to have found that.....

Thank you
*****************************

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

4 posted 2001-07-03 08:43 PM

Unconditional understanding...PERFECT! Much easier to give than to get, unfortunately. A good write and much appreciated. Thanks!

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-07-04 11:09 AM

LadyInWhite~
Such lovely peace I found in this lovely piece.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

6 posted 2001-07-04 04:14 PM

beautiful words. Loved this

"Like Sand underneath the snow, I make you mine." Kristin Hersh

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