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Don't Fall
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Don't Fall |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
Don't you fall on me with sudden failures do not tangle me in your web of hatred Don't you realize Heaven is tragedy for the angels hearts that leave it to me. Don't you fall from grace when your not all perfect don't you trip on me as you fail your purpose We are full of hope that regrets take hold of as we stand alone at the alter of heaven. Don't fall to your knees when the rage takes over don't give in to the pain that hate has in its silence Turn your eyes to me so you feel my heart beating take my hand in yours and walk to the shore line. We are what we hate the perfect absolution the feelings we envoke those chances we see fleeting we can choose to die our souls lost forever or live into our world that flows from our imagination. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Michael G: WOW!! this is so very powerful - I loved the read!  ~Roniece~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Michael, I am stunned by this writing, and so very glad that I did not miss it! Wonderful, deep writing. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Great wisdom to this one. And at last a happy poem!!! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
excellent words of encouragement. . . superbly done. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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