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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-07-03 04:30 PM


in heaven

Oh God
is there really a heaven.
Are you really there?
Do you really love me.
Do you really care?
Oh God
is there really a heaven
and is my Dad there.
If so does he love me.
If so does he care?
Oh God
is there really a heaven.
Are you really there?
How about my friend Margaret
is she waiting up there?
And did she really love me.
Does she still care?
Oh God
are you really in heaven
and does it hurt much to die.
Will I see you in heaven
in the sweet by-and-by?

JamesLee@July03,2001


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Denise
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1 posted 2001-07-03 05:13 PM


This is very touching, James. Very well expressed!
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2 posted 2001-07-03 05:45 PM


it is beautiful James ..and I know the answer .
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3 posted 2001-07-03 05:45 PM


it is beautiful James ..and I know the answer .
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4 posted 2001-07-03 05:49 PM


beautifully done...
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5 posted 2001-07-03 06:10 PM


You can know the answer ... submit.
Well done.

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6 posted 2001-07-03 06:23 PM


well done my friend. . .

you know the answer. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

vandana
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7 posted 2001-07-04 11:06 AM


enjoy your read
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8 posted 2001-07-04 11:10 AM


James,
No one knows for sure. Enjoyed the read.

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9 posted 2001-07-04 11:11 AM


Seek and ye shall find. It's no secret really, for the clues are everywhere.
Great write!

Deb

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10 posted 2001-07-04 11:17 AM


Even the most faithful, asked these questions sometimes. Great poem.
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11 posted 2001-07-04 12:18 PM


HUGS my sweet friend...look around you...go up on Diamond Head and look...how can there NOT be GOD? All that from an explosion? Do you really think so? Im here if you are needing to talk....always
JamesMichael
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12 posted 2002-03-27 01:19 AM


Thank you Denise, helen, Cpat, interloper, Sven, vandana, Seymour, Deb, walker and Paula for the wonderful responses...
Yes indeed I do know the answer..as much is earthy possible for us to know of heavenly things...in faith I know and believe...James

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