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Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

0 posted 2001-07-03 03:40 PM

through your eyes

as if I could
although I did
stride in
while you stalked
out for a
moment

briefly

beholding and
beheld by
all you see

stepping into your
thoughts
thinking

you see all of this

then you safely
quietly
compartmentalize
behind
your eyes

you sigh
and stir
begin to wake

stepping out,

stepping down,

no high horses here,

coming around,

bending,

for after seeing
things your way,

there is a need

no, there is my need

to kiss your
sleeping eyes

Don't discuss yourself, you are bound to lose; if you belittle yourself, you are believed; if you praise yourself, you are disbelieved. Michel de Montaigne

[This message has been edited by Decaflame (edited 07-03-2001).]

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2001-07-03 03:46 PM

Wow...this is rather like tranquility after a storm to me...and I gotta love all this eye kissing going on of late...very pretty poem!!!

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-07-03 03:47 PM

Oh, I like this one. "To kiss your sleeping eyes", what a wonderful line!!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

3 posted 2001-07-03 03:53 PM

Ahh, such a lovely thought and perception, as only you seem to do..gentle smile

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-07-03 06:40 PM

there's only one way to see this. . .

beautiful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2001-07-03 09:10 PM

Wait, I am just now dozing off ... wait ...
How beautifully woven, this tapestry of love

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2001-07-03 09:42 PM

wow this is wonderful......

( ok, I'm at a loss of words tonight, tired) I loved this

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

7 posted 2001-07-03 11:50 PM

oh......I loved this.....
The pondering.......the wondering.....and the simple softly radiant love....

Thank you
*************************

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2001-07-04 10:57 AM

enjoy

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

9 posted 2001-07-04 11:57 AM

there is a need

no, there is my need

to kiss your
sleeping eyes

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what a wonderful closing line...
what a lovely intend
beautiful thoughts Deca
your pen sighs in poetic longing with grace

We're all feeding our lonely like it might go away,
Like the doors of heaven will swing wide open if we just find the right words to say.
~E. McCain

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