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Considering Constellation..........
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Considering Constellation.......... |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
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Exploration outer space some other time a distant place my thoughts travel among the stars -never mind Venus forget about Mars- in the heavens moonlit grace picture perfect I see your face shining down in midnight sky astro-smiling ever sly considering constellation from mountain top view I still mourn the loss of you ~SEA~ |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
The title is great.. and the poem lives up to it..( a bit sad though).. enjoyed  There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
hard not to mourn those no longer with us..for what ever reason.. Enjoyed the poem... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sweet SEA!!! I can picture this! Nice work! |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Liked it allot! |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Susan, This is very pretty and a nice tribute as well. Hugs! Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Very gentle smile to you, SEA, what can be more beautiful feeling than to have the black of nightness reaching back to you with its fireflies of light and wonderment...lovely tribute and thoughts |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
SEA....this is wonderful....your growth is showing.... |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
A touching write...beautifully penned. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, I agree, very beautifully done! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Oh, SEA, please do not mourn ...  |
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esclandre Member
since 2001-06-11
Posts 62Northern California |
yep - and sometimes those stars seem a lot closer than he is, don't they? *sigh* nice, poignant poem. Esclandre |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Very touching SEA, with a mournful quality that works very well with the imagery, I liked this alot. Thank you. Regards, Olias. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
SEA- beautiful poem!! you have such lovely imagery woven in this hon that makes your reader really FEEL and SEE your words. This is a wonderful tribute to the loss of a loved one. just simply wonderful expressin of love. thanx for posting this. take care. amy "but i see your true colors, |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
We see the face of those we love and miss, in many things. Nicely written. Deb |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Jamie~ I'm glad you liked this even though it is a bit sad Cpat Hair~ yes....very hard, thanks Serenity~ you are such a sweetie, thank you Walker~ excellent, thank you Michael~ thank you, love those hugs right back to ya! Logan~thank you, that was a beautiful reply Decaflame~ that's wonderful, thank you PM~thank you Denise~ thanks! Interloper~ sometimes I need to, thanks Escandre~yes, thanks OLIAS~ thank you Amy~ you are just so sweet, thank you Deb~ yes, and at the strangest times too, thank you ~SEA |
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